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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, few universities started offering a plethora of
courses
 online due to make it more accessible to the pupils. In my point of view, I believe it has more pros as compared to cons.
First
 of all, offering
courses
 online can influence a large number of students to enter the
courses
, since the student can join from different parts of the world.
Moreover
, there is a vast chance to get knowledge out of the box due to joining an international course.
For instance
, pupils get to know umpteen number of data about different countries and variety of cultures from their classmates.
Furthermore
, it can emphasize their network globally by making new friends, which has a great chance to lead them toward more opportunities due to having a strong network around the world. Despite knowing plenty of advantages of doing online
courses
, yet it has some drawbacks as well.
Such
 as It can make students isolated reason of joining classes from home and become less concentrated on the lecture.
For instance
, staying comfort zone like, the home makes them more relaxed, even home environment is not so calm as like as university. so that, they could not able to concentrate on lectures entirely. On
this
 occasion, there is a huge chance of not performing well in their exam due to a lack of understanding of the exam topic. To consider all the relevant aspects, it is clear that
although
 online education has some negative points, yet it brings a plethora of advantages that outweigh the downside easily.
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