Some people believe that alone children to make the on choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about the own wishes other people believe that it is important for children to make a decisions about matters that affect them? Discuss both this views and give your own opinion

A group of people maintain that policing children to make their own decisions and their daily life like food, toys or clothes would lead to makes
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selfish. While, it's often said that, it can be useful for people
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early age to decide about their daily. Personally, I believe that it might be beneficial if children
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decide in different situations. On the
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others or in injure by different tools that they would play with them.
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that age, they cannot recognize properly.
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, they might cut their finger when they are working with
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so they will afraid.
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, If they make all of the decisions in their life by themselves, they will probably make some of them wrong.
As a result
, they would choose an inappropriate view in some situations. Sadly, because of their young ,
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they will memorize that and use it in their adult. For any sense
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their toys when they grew up they will keep
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selfish and wretched person.  
On the other hand
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of benefits.
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it would make them creative. As, when they want to choose something they have to think about all sides of it and analyze the effect of that, they will find out something new. I mean that, when they think about issues, they would find different solutions for a problem.
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early age. Not only they will increase their knowledge and use them when they have grown up, but
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they will find their ability or their interests
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generally it's useful for not only their childhood
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but
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Autonomy
  • Consequence-awareness
  • Self-centered
  • Informal decision-making education
  • Child development
  • Age-appropriate choices
  • Cognitive growth
  • Fostering independence
  • Parental guidance
  • Societal norms
  • Interpersonal consideration
  • Balance of freedom
  • Individualism versus collectivism
  • Experience-based learning
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