Some people believe that alone children to make the on choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about the own wishes other people believe that it is important for children to make a decisions about matters that affect them? Discuss both this views and give your own opinion
A group of people maintain that policing children to make their own decisions and their daily life like food, toys or clothes would lead to makes hurt
next generation
selfish. While, it's often said that, it can be useful for people Add a hyphen
next-generation
in
early age to decide about their daily. Personally, I believe that it might be beneficial if children Correct your spelling
an
freedomly
decide in different situations.
On the Correct your spelling
freedom
hand
, they mightCorrect quantifier usage
other hand
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be
from
others or in injure by different tools that they would play with them. Change preposition
by
This
means that due to the less experience which they might own in
that age, they cannot recognize properly. Change preposition
at
For example
, they might cut their finger when they are working with Add an article
a scissor
scissor
so they will afraid. Fix the agreement mistake
scissors
Secondly
, If they make all of the decisions in their life by themselves, they will probably make some of them wrong. As a result
, they would choose an inappropriate view in some situations. Sadly, because of their young ,mind
they will memorize that and use it in their adult. For any sense Add a comma
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For instance
, if they believe that nobody allow
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allows
to use
their toys when they grew up they will keep Change the verb form
using
this
view which means nobody can borrow something from them and they will become too
selfish and wretched person.
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a too
the too
On the other hand
, I think decision-making for toddlers has several sort
of benefits. Change to a plural noun
sorts
To begin
,with
it would make them creative. As, when they want to choose something they have to think about all sides of it and analyze the effect of that, they will find out something new. I mean that, when they think about issues, they would find different solutions for a problem. Change preposition
apply
Besides
, it can be helpful for gaining more experiences Change preposition
at in
in
early age. Not only they will increase their knowledge and use them when they have grown up, but Correct your spelling
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also
they will find their ability or their interests such
as their favourite job.
To conclude, although
allowing offspring to decision-making might cause some issues, ,
generally it's useful for not only their childhoodChange the punctuation
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,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
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