Some people believe that alone children to make the on choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about the own wishes other people believe that it is important for children to make a decisions about matters that affect them? Discuss both this views and give your own opinion

A group of people maintain that policing children to make their own decisions and their daily life like food, toys or clothes would lead to makes

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early age to decide about their daily. Personally, I believe that it might be beneficial if children

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others or in injure by different tools that they would play with them.

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means that due to the less experience which they might own

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that age, they cannot recognize properly.

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, they might cut their finger when they are working with

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so they will afraid.

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, If they make all of the decisions in their life by themselves, they will probably make some of them wrong.

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, they would choose an inappropriate view in some situations. Sadly, because of their young ,

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they will memorize that and use it in their adult. For any sense

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, if they believe that nobody

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their toys when they grew up they will keep

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view which means nobody can borrow something from them and they will become

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selfish and wretched person.  

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, I think decision-making for toddlers has several

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it would make them creative. As, when they want to choose something they have to think about all sides of it and analyze the effect of that, they will find out something new. I mean that, when they think about issues, they would find different solutions for a problem.

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, it can be helpful for gaining more experiences

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early age. Not only they will increase their knowledge and use them when they have grown up, but

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they will find their ability or their interests

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as their favourite job. To conclude,

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allowing offspring to decision-making might cause some issues, 

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generally it's useful for not only their childhood

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for their adult.