Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Some

people

believe that the death penalty is important to control crimes in society, without one will make

people

's lives unsecured. I strongly agree with

this

statement and I will present the reason for that. There should be capital punishment when it comes to punishing bad

people

, but only reserve for those who commit unacceptable acts of violence,

such

as murdering others or making ones become disabled for their entire

life

. These

people

that decided to do

such

horrible things should not be allowed to live their lives

further

However

, the death penalty should not be used too much, because it can create unfairness to

people

who mistakenly do bad things when they have no other choices at all.

For instance

, in Thailand, some

people

are so poor, so they have to steal some food from restaurants so that they can live their

life

. On top of that, if there is no capital punishment at all, it means that

people

who commit terrible crimes will get into jail

instead

of getting punished by death.

This

situation is not considered to be healthy for society because of two reasons.

Firstly

, the government needs to waste a lot of money to keep these

people

in jail, provide them with some food,

for example

Secondly

this

shows injustice for victims and their family, because

people

who commit the crimes can live their entire

life

without paying any money in jail, whereas the victims' families have to live their

life

knowing their loved ones were gone. In conclusion,

although

some

people

believe that capital punishment should not exist, I consider that

this

thing is so important to ensure safety for

people

's lives. Without

this

can create unfairness to victims and their families.

Submitted by t.jittiwat on Mon Nov 08 2021

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