Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some argue that the onus is on

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to teach

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how to be good members of the community, others maintain that

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is the function of

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. Both sides of

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argument are sensible and I am of the firm belief that both have an equal and significant part to play. Some consider that

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are responsible for developing their offspring’s personality traits

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so that they know how to behave in society when they grow up. As

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grow up,

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shoulder the responsibility of taking care of them and teaching them skills

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as toilet training or eating with a knife and fork.

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regard their

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as role models, to whom they look up and from whom they learn.

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, it is reasonable to expect

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to introduce, for example, table manners, social etiquette and their roles in society to them. Contrary to the above, it is argued that

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should be responsible for preparing students to be helpful members of society.

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is based on the premise that

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are an agent of social control,

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they play a vital part in instilling norms and values which are important in both adulthood and the workplace.

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help

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to socialise and learn simultaneously. In some parts of Southeast Asia,

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in primary

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are required to participate in at least one team sport, helping them to develop teamwork and communication skills.

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, formal education

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helps to teach youngsters aspects of the 'hidden curriculum' including showing respect for authority, timekeeping and obeying school rules. In conclusion, I strongly believe that an equal role has to be played with regards to educating

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. After all,

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spend the majority of their day in the company of their families,

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it is only right that they play a key part in the less formal aspects of their child's education and upbringing.