Despite the existence of legal institutions such as courts to resolve differences between people, some people still think that it is better to settle for cases out of courts. To what extent so you agree
Some
people
consider that solving legal issues out of any law institutions
would be better than settling with judicatory. I strongly disagree with Fix the agreement mistake
institution
this
statement. In my opinion, resolving any problem which is related law
must go through the court. Change preposition
to law
However
it may take longer
process, it can prevent unfair compensation from the victim with any threats, and Correct article usage
a longer
also
it provides legal needs that
is
the core of democracy. In some Change the verb form
are
case
, There is Fix the agreement mistake
cases
sudden
accident Correct article usage
a sudden
Correct your spelling
occurred
occured
, some Correct pronoun usage
that occured
people
tend to manage it by deal
. Add an article
the deal
For example
, my younger brother accidently
hit his friend and broke his nose. Both sides wanted to make a deal and pay some recovery fee Correct your spelling
accidentally
instead
of solve
it by legal Change the verb form
solving
institutions
. In this
case, there was no proof to pay compensation or no guaranteed recovery fee from any medical institution which means victim
can ask Add an article
the victim
much
amount of compensation he Change preposition
for much
want
. On the other side, majority of citizens do not Change the verb form
wants
familier
with legal provisions which can be Correct your spelling
familiar
advantage
for somebody who wants to gain from any sudden problem. Add an article
an advantage
People
do not want to get in legal trouble,
so that they prefer to pay the fee and get along. But solving problems with legal Remove the comma
apply
institutions
can be endangered from any illegal extra amount of expenditure. Moreover
, If only legal knowledge of populations increases, people
can use knowlegde
to deal with issues with Correct your spelling
knowledge
fair
and balance. Replace the word
fairness
For instance
, If one get
in trouble, he or she can analyze and make Change the verb form
gets
clear
Correct article usage
a clear
evalution
Correct your spelling
evaluation
evolution
evaluations
for
the situation. Change preposition
of
Also
it can be helpful for the upcoming steps in courts and lawyers to make a decision.
To sum up, Solving any problems without legal Add a comma
,Also
institutions
cannot be better than make
a dealWrong verb form
making
Change preposition
apply
with
. It may Correct pronoun usage
themwith
supports
Change the verb form
support
other illegal and unfair method
to make a profit. Even though processing through the law can be complicated, it would be suitable for both sides to make Change the wording
another illegal and unfair method
other illegal and unfair methods
Add an article
a decision
decision
appropriately.Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
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