Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?
It is widely admitted that
art
is a core part of community development and play a major role in the future of junior's life. Some people are believed that learning art
has a significant reason, and it must be a certain point more than other subjects. This
essay is totally believed in the significance of creative activities for children
and societies, and I will illustrate that later.
Undoubtedly, art
is considered a much important partner in life aspects. In other words
, cooking is a kind of art
and it is explained the countries culture
. For instance
, Kabsa, Mataziz, Mandi and Margoge are traditional Saudi
cuisines, which reflect this
culture
around the world as well Koshary and Fata are Egyptian traditional cuisines. Thus
, cooking plays an undeniably major role in expressing the civilization of nations.
Fortunately, children
are considered the bright star of the world's future and teaching them their cultural history is quite important. In other words
, teaching children
different types of arts increases their attachment to their culture
. For example
, although
the Saudi
curricula used to give importance to education in general, it gives special importance to teaching the art
of Saudi
cooking because of its clear impact in strengthening the connection with Saudi
history and pupils, and they will not forget that importance.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that art
is an essential part of the culture
of our society and teaching this
subject should be very important for the future of our children
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- secondly
- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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