In some countries, people waste a lot of food that they buy in shops and restaurants. Why do people waste food? What can we do to reduce the waste?

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These days, we have enough
condition
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to serve ourselves a meal and provide nutrition for our body to stay healthy.
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, the wealthier we are, the more waste we produce, especially
food
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of all, why do people waste
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? Personally, I think there are 3 main reasons for
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Firstly
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, when a person is rich, they tend to buy and consume more to brag with everyone about their asset.
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, they are gonna get everything unique and special without knowing that they won’t use it ever again.
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, many countries are affected by religion, cultural which change their perspective.
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, In Vietnam, It is believed that your hospitality will be measured by how much
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you treat them.
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, when the fun come to end, all the
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left behind will be
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but the majority of them will go to
trash
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the trash
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, as per the study, our humanity started in the wild when we climbed
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a tree
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tree
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to hide, kill to survive and lived in
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a cave
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cave
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, biologically, we tend to hoard as much
food
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as we can to survive like many other animals, and it might still be in our genes so far.
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