Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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acquisition

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of non-native

language

in

first

-level

education

instead

of secondary school is claimed to be sparking controversy, I agreed that

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point of doing so outnumber the drawbacks. Broadening

children

’s

mind

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as well as

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effectiveness of learning

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such

low ages will be discussed as two major positive

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, followed by thwarting

children

’s willingness to

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in some

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as the main pitfall. The

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of

children

for seeking new knowledge, on the one hand, could facilitate the process of learning.

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enthusiasm, albeit not existing in all

children

to learn another

language

, would encourage them to

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other ways to develop their

language

skills out of school ranging from movies to

education

-related software and applications.

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being the case,

children

may face

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new challenges with the effect of gradually helping them out with broadening their minds which leads them to educational prosperity. Supplementary to

this

, being at the stage of learning seems to bolster

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the productivity

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of cultivating

language

skills.

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high quality, in the long

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would bring high efficiency, which

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learners to

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expert

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in other international languages including French,

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and Dutch. If so, the level of

education

in society can be promoted. On a more negative note, learning another

language

except primary in

first

-level

education

may

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seekers’ eagerness on account of complexity and hardness of

education

, high volume of know-how, to name but a few.

However

, the certainty of

such

deficiency is questionable inasmuch as cultivating

language

skills could be

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by using new methods, an example of which could be simple, low budget and fun games.

This

action,

accordingly

, could prevent dwindling the enthusiasm of

children

. To recapitulate, regarding the debate surrounding whether teaching foreign

language

in primary school to

children

could bring more benefits or pitfalls, the demerit of the feasibility of inundating

children

with degradation their interest would seem to

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by the merits of widening the way of thinking

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bringing the utmost level of effectiveness.