You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months -say how your work could be done while you are away -ask for his/her in arranging in

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you about my desire to gain
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of Accounts in Dubai for the
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six months. As you are aware that there are transfer pricing issues, which is raised by the local authorities of the United Arab Emirates. In my past jobs, I had
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experience that can contribute, and provide me
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opportunity to learn
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regulations of Dubai.
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, I believe that my transfer
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head
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office for the
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six months is critical to assist
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. My regular tasks can be performed by Mr Mukul, who is looking for
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to grow in my
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, it is a real opportunity for him to display his capabilities.
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, other analytical tasks of the branch will be executed by me online during my stay at the
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office. It would be critical for you to arrange a meeting among us to define the execution strategy for all the activities within
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for
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period. My meeting with Mr Mukul went well related to
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issue,
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I am waiting for your kind approval. I am awaiting your response. Yours faithfully, Ryan Smith
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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