Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this option?
There is no doubt that these days
crime
rate is increasing Correct article usage
the crime
between
Change preposition
among
the
young people by Correct article usage
apply
horrible
level. The question is, is the Correct article usage
a horrible
crime
rate between children
increasing because they do not receive the social and emotional learning, or there are other reasons can
be the main factor for that? In Correct pronoun usage
that can
this
essay, I am going to discuss both sides and draw my own conclusion.
In terms of some views, parents
play a major role in the childhood of everybody, and many believe that child
's soul is like a white paper. The main reason to support this
chain is that the
teenagers tend to Correct article usage
apply
listening
to Change the verb form
listen
adult's
advice when facing difficulties in their life because they need an actually mature person to guide them. To illustrate, a minimum of help from family and relatives can cause to Fix the agreement mistake
adults'
child
's lack of social skills. In other words
, kids whose parents
ignore them face difficulties when joining to
an extended society and they have higher probabilities to diagnose with hostile Change preposition
apply
behaviors
for community or mental disease. These disabilities are so awful because the sick have reckless features Change the spelling
behaviours
such
as violence and bad mood and sometimes
unable to control themselves. Add a missing verb
are sometimes
Therefore
, children
cannot grow fully, unless by parents
' directions.
However
, little kids react with
violent Change preposition
to
contents
frequently. Fix the agreement mistake
content
Firstly
, if the teenager watched offensive and sexual content without awareness of adults. In other words
, young children
cannot distinguish movies than
real life. because of Change preposition
from
that
they want to be representatives or influencers and Add a comma
,that
this
will change their characters immediately. Secondly
, teens can practice a
wrong moral law and they violate the laws without their knowledge. Correct article usage
the
For example
, in England
there was a Add a comma
,England
child
aged 13 years old. The reason behind the crime
is in video
games that he played. Correct article usage
the video
Thus
, there is no doubt that there are different types from
media capable Change preposition
of
to
influencing in Change preposition
of
child
's psyche, for this
cause it can increase of
deviation among Change preposition
apply
children
.
In conclusion, although
the fact that lack of parents
knowledge is the main reason for events crime
, the media role is critical. Therefore
, I believe that if parents
and teachers are trained enough to raise babies, kids will not only be involved in the crime
,
but other psychological problems will Remove the comma
apply
also
be eliminated.Submitted by besho0h on
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