Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this option?

There is no doubt that these days

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rate is increasing

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the

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young people by

horrible

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level. The question is, is the

crime

rate between

children

increasing because they do not receive the social and emotional learning, or there are other reasons

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be the main factor for that? In

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essay, I am going to discuss both sides and draw my own conclusion. In terms of some views,

parents

play a major role in the childhood of everybody, and many believe that

child

's soul is like a white paper. The main reason to support

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chain is that

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teenagers tend to

listening

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to

adult's

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advice when facing difficulties in their life because they need an actually mature person to guide them. To illustrate, a minimum of help from family and relatives can cause to

child

's lack of social skills.

In other words

, kids whose

parents

ignore them face difficulties when joining

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an extended society and they have higher probabilities to diagnose with hostile

behaviors

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behaviours

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for community or mental disease. These disabilities are so awful because the sick have reckless features

such

as violence and bad mood and

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unable to control themselves.

Therefore

,

children

cannot grow fully, unless by

parents

' directions.

However

, little kids react

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violent

contents

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frequently.

Firstly

, if the teenager watched offensive and sexual content without awareness of adults.

In other words

, young

children

cannot distinguish movies

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from

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real life. because of

that

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they want to be representatives or influencers and

this

will change their characters immediately.

Secondly

, teens can practice

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wrong moral law and they violate the laws without their knowledge.

For example

, in

England

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,England

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there was a

child

aged 13 years old. The reason behind the

crime

is in

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the video

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games that he played.

Thus

, there is no doubt that there are different types

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media capable

to

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influencing in

child

's psyche, for

this

cause it can increase

of

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deviation among

children

. In conclusion,

although

the fact that lack of

parents

knowledge is the main reason for events

crime

, the media role is critical.

Therefore

, I believe that if

parents

and teachers are trained enough to raise babies, kids will not only be involved in the

crime

,

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but other psychological problems will

also

be eliminated.