Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this option?

There is no doubt that these days
crime
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rate is increasing
between
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young people by
horrible
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level. The question is, is the
crime
rate between
children
increasing because they do not receive the social and emotional learning, or there are other reasons
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be the main factor for that? In
this
essay, I am going to discuss both sides and draw my own conclusion. In terms of some views,
parents
play a major role in the childhood of everybody, and many believe that
child
's soul is like a white paper. The main reason to support
this
chain is that
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teenagers tend to
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to
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advice when facing difficulties in their life because they need an actually mature person to guide them. To illustrate, a minimum of help from family and relatives can cause to
child
's lack of social skills.
In other words
, kids whose
parents
ignore them face difficulties when joining
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an extended society and they have higher probabilities to diagnose with hostile
behaviors
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for community or mental disease. These disabilities are so awful because the sick have reckless features
such
as violence and bad mood and
sometimes
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unable to control themselves.
Therefore
,
children
cannot grow fully, unless by
parents
' directions.
However
, little kids react
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violent
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frequently.
Firstly
, if the teenager watched offensive and sexual content without awareness of adults.
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, young
children
cannot distinguish movies
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real life. because of
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they want to be representatives or influencers and
this
will change their characters immediately.
Secondly
, teens can practice
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wrong moral law and they violate the laws without their knowledge.
For example
, in
England
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there was a
child
aged 13 years old. The reason behind the
crime
is in
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games that he played.
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, there is no doubt that there are different types
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media capable
to
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influencing in
child
's psyche, for
this
cause it can increase
of
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deviation among
children
. In conclusion,
although
the fact that lack of
parents
knowledge is the main reason for events
crime
, the media role is critical.
Therefore
, I believe that if
parents
and teachers are trained enough to raise babies, kids will not only be involved in the
crime
,
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but other psychological problems will
also
be eliminated.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • juvenile crime
  • social and emotional learning
  • parental guidance
  • educational system
  • technology addiction
  • media influence
  • behavioral patterns
  • societal issues
  • economic disparities
  • comprehensive intervention
  • crime prevention strategies
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