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The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade - labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries

The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade - labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries
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The data reported in the two tables provide insights
on
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 the
coffee
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 and
bananas
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 trade in five
countries
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 of the European continent. The tables present a comparison of
sales
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 revenue between the years 1999 and 2004. Generally speaking, the
sales
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 of
coffee
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had
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increased between 1999 and 2004 in all five
countries
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whereas
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 the
sales
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 of
bananas
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 increased in only three
countries
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 and decreased in two of them.
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,
Switzerland
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 was on top in trading
bananas
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 and
coffee
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 in the year 1999 but in the year 2004 UK surpassed
Switzerland
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 in the
coffee
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 trade
while
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 in the market of
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bananas
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,bananas
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Switzerland
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 managed to maintain its position. Talking specifically about the
coffee
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 market,
Swiss
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the Swiss
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 led the trade in 1999 accounting for 3 million euros but
2004
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in 2004
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 recorded a sale of 20 million euros from the UK which was significantly higher than the other four nations.
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, Sweden had the lowest sale of
coffee
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 in both the years 1999 and 2004 quantifying
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0.8 and 1 million euros respectively. The banana market, between 1999 and 2004, experienced a rise in
sales
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 in
Switzerland
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, the UK, and Belgium
whereas
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 Sweden and Denmark recorded a downfall. Surprisingly, the analysis reveals that the total
sales
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 made by
countries
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 other than
Switzerland
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 are less than half the
sales
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 of
Switzerland
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 in both the years 1999 and 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas, countries, sales, switzerland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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