You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your senior director. In your letter ● apologise for what happened ● explain why you missed the deadline ● tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding a vital consumer, who has decided to discontinue
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us due to not fulfiling their
timeline
. Accept my apology, I do understand that our organisation has earned substantial amounts of profits in the past, but meeting the
timeline
could be
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all these past profits that we made from
this
firm, in my view. Causes of not fulfiling
timeline
, meeting the
timeline
for the customer requires significant amounts of resources , which could incur
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loss
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for our organisation;
therefore
, I
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to delay the project. Our customer has lost financially due to not running the operation in time according to customer’s view.
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decision-making,
consequently
, I have developed a new workflow, which will assist me to get a quick authorisation from you with the cost and benefit analysis for you that I have attached with
this
email. I am awaiting your response about
this
workflow and feedback for any improvement that you may require. Yours faithfully, Ryan Smith
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