You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your senior director. In your letter ● apologise for what happened ● explain why you missed the deadline ● tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you regarding a vital consumer, who has decided to discontinue
with
us due to not fulfiling their Remove the preposition
apply
timeline
.
Accept my apology, I do understand that our organisation has earned substantial amounts of profits in the past, but meeting the timeline
could be wiped-off
all these past profits that we made from Correct your spelling
wiped off
this
firm, in my view.
Causes of not fulfiling timeline
, meeting the timeline
for the customer requires significant amounts of resources , which could incur huge
Add an article
a huge
loss
for our organisation; Fix the agreement mistake
losses
therefore
, I decide
to delay the project. Our customer has lost financially due to not running the operation in time according to customer’s view.
Change the form of the verb
decided
Future
decision-making, Change preposition
In future
consequently
, I have developed a new workflow, which will assist me to get a quick authorisation from you with the cost and benefit analysis for you that I have attached with this
email.
I am awaiting your response about this
workflow and feedback for any improvement that you may require.
Yours faithfully,
Ryan SmithSubmitted by toriqul1976 on
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