There are different customs in different countries related to how people eat, dress, and so on. Some think that people visiting a country should behave according to customs of the country they visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, more and more
peole
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people
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to other countries ,and a handful of individuals hold the belief that travellers should pay attention to the culture of the
country
, which is their
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. In my opinion, I strongly agree with
this
point of view that people should consider the traditions of the
country
, which are visited. I will discuss my opinion below.
Firstly
, each
country
has different customs that are expected to
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by people including citizens and tourists. When an individual decides to travel to other countries they should learn more about the culture and traditions of that
country
to show his or her respect towards the local people.
In addition
, if they want to have an enjoyable experience without making uncomfortable situations for themselves, they should find out about acceptable behaviours in a foreign society .
For instance
, in UEA it is an uncommon action to wear a revealing top for women and
therefore
UEA residents would feel that her attitude is out of the moral codes of the society.
Secondly
, the aim of the trip is to experience culture and attitudes. While you are searching
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actions in a foreign
country
, you would become familiar with the international customs, which you are going to deal with them when you reach that
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.
Furthermore
, if you act according to codes of behaviours , the communication would be easier and
therefore
you can find new friends while making new relationships.
For instance
, Koreans would show their respect to each other via bowing and
therefore
, if you act the same as them, they would consider you a venerable person. In conclusion,
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think that in order to not transgress, visitors should expand their knowledge regarding their destinations.
Besides
, it would be an educational trip if they search about abroad.
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