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There are different customs in different countries related to how people eat, dress, and so on. Some think that people visiting a country should behave according to customs of the country they visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Although
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 globalization is happening in the world,some regions have their own ways of eating,dressing and behaving. some people say that
tourists
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,who arrive in those countries, should follow vernacular
traditions
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,while others say they should not.I believe,local
traditions
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 must be followed by foreigners and in ,essay, I will explain why.
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,
tourists
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 should behave respectfully to the
country
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 and its inhabitants.
Tourists
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 are only guests at the travel destinations,
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,local people follow those
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 for
centries
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.
For example
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, women in
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 Arab Emirates are restricted to
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 short skirts or even pants due to their
traditions
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, whereas it is essential for European women to wear them.
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, it is going to be unrespectful towaArabianbian girls, If female
tourists
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 from overseas put inadequate clothing on
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 while visiting emirates.
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, another point to consider is the back
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 from residents.The
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 opened their doors for foreigners in order to share with their nature and architecture. To illustrate
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, the same Emirates are ready to offer us
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 the beauty of their
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, in spite of the differences in traditional and customary practices with the half of the world.
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,permission to visit the
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 is
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 from the population, where you are going to travel to, so another reason to follow customs of them. To sum up, there are several reasons to adhere to the rules of your visited
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. Those include
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 you show and
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 you have gotten from the host
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. I truly believe, people should follow customs in order to
respect
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 hosting land.
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