Some parents think that it is good to have mobile phones for their children, others disagree with it. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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two decades, communication has been improving tremendously than ever before due to

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of the technology,

as a result

, multitudes use mobiles for many reasons. Some parents believe that having

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is

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good for their little one's while

others

denied for some

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.

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essay discusses both viewpoints I strongly agree with the former opinion for the subsequent reasons. On the one hand,

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gadget can be helped

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enormous level when any emergency and accidents

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,

this

can easily contact to

others

and will get immediate help from

others

.

In other words

, nowadays countless fathers and mothers are

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and their children are being at home alone while

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can be checked to their

kids

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safety through

this

gadget,

hence

, today's parents are given mobile to their's little buds.

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, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 70% of

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children are used phones for they give uptade news to their mothers while being alone at home or anywhere.

On the other hand

,

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electronic device can lead to affecting a child life tremendously even in

childhood

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period they will suffer more because

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harmful for preteens. To be more precise, if a kid has a phone and he plays online games

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anytime

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, it would be affected their's eyesight power and

this

can lead to being obesity due to they will not like to play outside games,

thus

, they

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power glass since childhood period.

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, a recent report by WHO said that more than 80% of

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preteens are

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to

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obesity

problem

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to

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around the world.

Hence

, these kinds of electronic devices

always

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give more harmful. To conclude, mobile

phones

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is

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an inevitable aspect

for

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people's life,

therefore

, mothers think that

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is a good one for having phone who their's buds while

others

say that

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provides more harmful effect to

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.

However

, in my opinion, about

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, children have mobile is a good idea in nowadays because they will face any accident or emergency situation while

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can be helped an enormously.