News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in a newspaper. What factors do you think influence their decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

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For decades most

people

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would start their day with a cup of coffee with their newspaper or having

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breakfast while watching the

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people

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prefer to start their days with some information about the worlds current events to be more insightful about

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happening around them.

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if we really think about it most of the

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we get

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negative, which makes us wonder is it because we got used to getting the bad

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? or is there a deeper reason why

editors

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decide to

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more than others?

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should

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broadcast

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and print more positive

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because it will uplift peoples

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spirits

when they start their days. there must be multiple factors

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effecting

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their decisions on what to share with the world,

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unfortunately

the majority of

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are more drawn to negative

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, perhaps because they want to be on alert on what could happen or it seems more important to them to know whats going bad rather knowing whats going well and that must

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the

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choice on what to publish as they are looking for higher views and traffic on their website or

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channel. it became custom for bad

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to be on the

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page as it gets peoples attention,

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positive

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should be shared as it will spread a more

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energy to hear

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in the morning

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, when good

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is shared it can be

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extremely

motivational for

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to do good as well. to conclude,

editors

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choice of what to broadcast or print must be

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by the

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viewing rate,

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positive

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be shared to send an uplifting

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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286 words

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broadcast
print
news editors
viewership
readership
ratings
revenue
sensational stories
scandals
dramatic events
relevance
societal issues
prominence
political influences
corporate influences
biases
ownership
political affiliations
immediacy
locality
target audience
human interest stories
emotional responses
desensitization
public apathy
indifference
optimistic outlook
community achievements
acts of kindness
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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in a newspaper. What factors do you think influence their decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

Fully explain your ideas

Doctors in many countries are saying that people are not getting enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this? How can it be addressed?

Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that businesses mainly benefit. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

The visuals give information about the number of hours students spent preparing for an admission test for an Asian university and their subsequent performance in that test. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Due to the availability of fast food nowadays, many people have low-quality diets. What problems can this cause? What can governments do to resolve these problems?