News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in a newspaper. What factors do you think influence their decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

For decades most
people
would start their day with a cup of coffee with their newspaper or having
thier
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their
breakfast while watching the
news
.
people
prefer to start their days with some information about the worlds current events to be more insightful about
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whats
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happening around them.
however
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if we really think about it most of the
news
we get
are
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negative, which makes us wonder is it because we got used to getting the bad
news
? or is there a deeper reason why
editors
decide to
prodcast
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podcast
broadcast
these
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news
more than others?
Editors
should
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broadcast
broadcasts
and print more positive
news
because it will uplift peoples
sperets
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spirits
when they start their days. there must be multiple factors
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effecting
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their decisions on what to share with the world,
unfourtuntly
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unfortunately
the majority of
people
are more drawn to negative
news
, perhaps because they want to be on alert on what could happen or it seems more important to them to know whats going bad rather knowing whats going well and that must
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the
editors
choice on what to publish as they are looking for higher views and traffic on their website or
news
channel. it became custom for bad
news
to be on the
first
page as it gets peoples attention,
however
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belive
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more
possitive
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positive
news
should be shared as it will spread a more
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uplifting
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up lifting
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energy to hear
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good
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goof
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good
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news
in the morning
news
.
also
, when good
news
is shared it can be
extremly
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extremely
motivational for
people
to do good as well. to conclude,
editors
choice of what to broadcast or print must be
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by the
populations
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viewing rate,
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nevertheless
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positive
news
should
also
be shared to send an uplifting
masssage
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massage
message
to
socity
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society
.
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