It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional culture are incompatible to what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is true that some traditional
customs
die out during the fast iterations of
technology
. While some traditional
cultures
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a disparity with
technology
, I think most of them will survive. Some loss of traditional
customs
happens when the
incompatition
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competition
to
technology
become
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huge.
Firstly
, the
customs
usually
has
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poor
technology
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support, which
make
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them
outdate
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outdated
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as the time period
changing
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changes
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.
Secondly
, due to the small
benefits
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,benefits
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some traditional
culture
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cultures
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can provide, it
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is
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it
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is
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not necessary for people to keep these
cultures
.
For example
, the culture may only entertain people with dance or singing,
instead
of true development of society or country which
technology
does.
Finally
, the
technology
updates itself with
a
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great efficiency, but the traditional
customs
stay behind, which make it a disparity between these
cultures
and the
technology
.
However
, there are
cultures
which
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can
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exist
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as the rapid change of
technology
happens. Some traditional
cultures
keep a distance from new
technology
and are usually not deeply influenced by it.
For example
, the traditional costumes have little relationship with
technology
and they are only associated with the style and dressing condition.
Besides
, there are traditions
have
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long
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historical
background
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backgrounds
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, which shows that they keep a balance with the techniques switch.
Furthermore
, we can try to protect the
valueable
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valuable
traditions and
cultures
from being lost by education or government support. In conclusion, while some traditional
cultures
will be
hided
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as new
technology
appears, most of them will keep their value and
exsit
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exit
exist
.
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