You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to let you know about an item which was purchased by me from your website on the 25th of March.I ordered a T-shirt,which was in
sale
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.Unfortunately,after it was delivered as scheduled on the 27th of March,I noticed that the T-shirt sent was of smaller
size
. I had ordered a large
size
green coloured T-shirt with big stripes in the front from the on-going sale in your company website.After it was delivered,I noticed that the sent item was of a different
size
,which is not fitting me at all.
Moreover
,it does not have stripes,which was another of my requirement. Would you kindly get it exchanged for a bigger
size
with stripes?If it is not possible,I could kindly request you to refund the amount in my wallet,so that I can opt for another purchase. Waiting to hear from you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Rehana
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • order number
  • shipment
  • delivery
  • damaged
  • defective
  • package
  • request
  • replacement
  • refund
  • customer support
  • awaiting your prompt response
  • solution
  • photos attached
  • upon inspection
  • apologies in advance
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