You have recently moved to a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you decided to move to a different city • Describe the new city and accommodation • Ask your friend to arrange a visit

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Dear Stephen, I'm writing to you to inform

that

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you that

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my decision to relocate

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a new town has happened as per my plan. My regular commuting using fast train was expensive in the 1st month of my employment;

therefore

, I'd few options left, but to change my current place.

Besides

communication, my private life was tormented as my ex-girlfriend decided to move on with her life. My new metropolis has various sorts of transportation and living facilities as well. You can travel to work by using

three-wheeler

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a three-wheeler

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, bus, rail, and personal

car

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care

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if you can

afford

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itafford

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Moreover

, living is quite cheap here as you can hire a studio flat below $300 per month. I'll encourage you for a trip to my town in

Easter

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the Easter

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holidays, which is approaching in the

month. My house has plenty of room for you, and there are some

historical

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historic

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places to experience in my view. So, you'll not be frustrated for sure. All the best! Ryan Smith

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