There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the transport company. In your letter: • Describe the problems • Explain how these problems are affecting the public • Suggest some changes that could be made
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding my commuting issues, which is solely relied upon the public bus services that are operated by your organization.
For
last
month, I am late at the workplace every day due to your vehicles are arriving late; therefore
, my office has deducted my previous month salary and received a disciplinary warning from HR. My bus ticket has been procured for a year; consequently
, I have no other choice.
Those delays enhanced frustration among my community people, who are seriously environment conscious, and they do not utilize their auto for travelling. Consequently
, my neighbours are considering a refund of their money or legal actions against your business.
My advice would be to plan your route properly. However
, identifying the causes of the delay with drivers can also
provide an instant solution to this
issue; otherwise
, the issue will be raised to the state authority.
I am awaiting your response.
Yours faithfully,
Ryan SmithSubmitted by toriqul1976 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite