Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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Dear Simran, Hope you are doing amazing. I am extremely sorry for cancelling our

movie

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plan for

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weekend. I know we are planning for

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movie

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date

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a very long time. In fact, you already booked

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tickets one month prior to our favourite

movie

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' The Ranbir Singh ' . But at the

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moment, I got an emergency call from my old patient of had severe pain and swelling in the mouth. Being a dentist , I have to operate on him as soon as possible. I would like to tell you that one of our common

friend

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Karan Gupta is

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interested in the same

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. He can join you at my place. You will be going to have an amazing time with him. Being your mutual friend , I know you both have similar interests .

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, you both are dentists so you both have so many topics to discuss. Hope to see you on another day. Sorry for causing you inconvenience .Regards to parents. Yours lovingly, Manvir

Manvir kaur bhattiThu Nov 11 2021

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

174 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Some people say showing program such as Olympics, cricket on television is the best way to encourage adults to do exercise. Some say that there are some other ways to encourage adults for exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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