You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college giving your accommodation requirements. You should outline what your room and food needs are and also ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want.

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Dear Sir, I hope
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letter finds you in good health. I am writing
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letter to you in order to get you favour for the accommodation needs at Hall of Residence
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year.
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and foremost, I would like to mention that I got the acceptance letter to study
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year from my respective college. By doing so, I may need to prepare ahead before the dates come for accommodation arrangement and all the alternative ways. To add to that, I would like to know the average cost of a room and monthly expenses of food which can be arranged at a college or if not, there can be any other possible suggestion that how it would be provided for a foreign student like me. It would be great if there has a chance to get the perfect supports from a college' side. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Honey Linn
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • therefore
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  • despite

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