You are getting married. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend to invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter describe who you are going to marry, tell what will happen on the wedding day (the schedule), explain why it’s important him/her be at the wedding.

Dear Sonia, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I have a surprise for you that I am getting married on the 28th of January and I am writing

this

letter to invite you to the wedding. You are always wanted to attend an Indian Sikh wedding and believe me you are going to enjoy all the functions before and after the marriage. My fiance, Udham Singh is working with Aces company as a Security Officer in Australia. We

first

met at Jalandhar and started loving each other. After that, he approached my parents through his family for a wedding. So, it is an arrange-cum-love marriage. You must come one week in advance because on the 15th of January, we have the 'Ring Ceremony' and on the

day, there is 'Ladies Sangeet' where you will get a taste of a lot of the folk culture of Punjab.

Then

we have the 'Mehandi' function on the 25th of January and

finally

the great wedding day on the 28th. You know in traditional Sikh marriage the bride and groom will take four rounds around the holy book known as Guru Granth Sahib. After the Doli ceremony, I shall leave my parents' home to go to a new house with my husband. You are my best friend and I know you are doing research on Indian traditional culture.

Therefore

, it is very crucial for you to attend my important day.

As a result

, it not only enhances your knowledge but you will definitely enjoy it. Thank you. Yours lovingly, Prabhjot Kaur

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7 paragraphs

265 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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