There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of the mobile phone?

Nowadays, many
people
use
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smartphone
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in
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worldwide. There are some issues which are social, medical and technical to utilize
phone
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. As for me, there are more benefits than drawbacks.
To begin
with, it is evident that it can communicate
people
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who stay in
far
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place. To illustrate, when the best friend
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to stay in
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, they can talk to use
the
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application
such
as Instagram, Facebook and line.
In addition
, they are able to search on the internet immediately what food or medicine
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positive
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effect on their body.
For example
, when they have sickness, they are able to research what kind of disease they receive, and they realize what sort of pills should purchase.
Thus
, they are possible to cure their bad condition without hospitalization.
Furthermore
, thanks to technology development, they can do a lot of things whenever and wherever they want. Recently,
people
tend to work in their
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using
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phone
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because of
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a pandemic
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pandemic
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.
This
trend will be
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normal working method in the future.
On the other hand
, using
mobile
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phone
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has some negative aspects.
First
of all, it can lead their poor eyesight.
This
is because
this
device always
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blue light which is bad for their eye. According to the research, individuals’ eyesight was worse than
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released
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technological
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.
Additionally
,
people
might be less likely to do face-to-face communication.
For instance
,
people
used to communicate with their friends or colleges
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online, when they meet directly, they might feel
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and less to talk. To sum up, I agree with
people
use
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mobile
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phone
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which has more positive
aspect
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than
negative
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. Because they can talk with
people
who live
in
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far from their area, deal with health problems and do their
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activities and job.
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