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Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs. To what extend do you agree ?

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Travelling to a foreign
country
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 is one of the privileges that humans have. We must consider ourselves lucky enough to have the ability to cross borders and experience different
cultures
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. As we all know that, every civilization has its own domestic
practices
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 and traditions. Some suggest that when a
person
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 journey into a different
country
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 they should comply with its local
practices
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 and traditions. I totally agree with the statement for several reasons which will be discussed in
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Firstly
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, adaptation to a foreign
culture
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, while you're on a trip, is essential for many. In order to absorb other
cultures
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 way of life and avoid being
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 people should
first
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 learn their local
practices
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. When someone goes abroad him/her Daily routine,
culture
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, food, tradition, and the attitudes of society around her/his will be no longer familiar. .
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, A
country
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 with high cultural sensitivities, like Indonesia, wants travellers to take their
culture
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 seriously. In Indonesia most of its inhabitants are Muslims,
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 an Indonesian man never shake hands with a woman unless she extends her hand
first
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.
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 to that, adaptation to different
cultures
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 is important so that people living there have positive thoughts about travellers who respect their
cultures
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.
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, knowing simple facts about the
country
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 and how daily life is lived can help you integrate better into society. To sum up, every
culture
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 has its unique customs and local
practices
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. In order to connect strong ties with different
cultures
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 and to communicate clearly and carefully, people should be aware of the traditions of the
country
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 where they travel and to adapt themselves as it as possible.
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