Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Presently, the

zoos

serve as public attractions and tourist

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where wild and rare creatures are preserved and kept on displays. While some exponents view

this

as a brutal measure, others, are of the opinion that it begets a secure environment.

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essay will discuss both sides of the argument and will provide my opinion

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. Certain groups believe that these animals are kidnapped rather than rescued from their natural habitats which

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in maladaptation eventually causing their deaths.

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, tourist

centers

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compete within themselves for popularity as to which has the most and rarest games in reserve which motivates them to go several miles to get to the top of the list.

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, resulting in

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of these

wildlifes

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wildlife

despite the adequate care provided to them. It simply demonstrates that these faunas are unable to adapt effectively to

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outside their territory which in turn is evidenced by the fact that our once robust

zoos

especially in Africa have made a paradigm shift and all

that is

left there now are mostly

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and models of the once alive creatures. Others,

nevertheless

are still adamant that the

zoos

provide a secure habitat to wildlife by rescuing them from poachers and certain animal games like hunting including the natural loss of their homes to hurricanes, forest fires

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and

erosion. Regardless of wild creatures, some animals like

antelops

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antelopes

antelope

, deers and even squirrels inhabiting the less dense forest that should still be found at

first

glance have gone into extinction

as a result

of certain human involvement including logging, deforestation, and hunting to mention a few but the

zoos

have served protection purposes to

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games and as well maintained their extant which is the reason why humans have not been subjected to just seeing

these animal

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on documentary

televisons

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television

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depicting the dire need to keep our animal reserves alive. I,

on the other

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opinion that

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leverage could be formed whereby the

zoos

are expanded and not limited to

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just buildings but all controlled forest that imitates their habitats.

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would proffer a big solution to their maladaptation and make them better accustomed to the vicinity

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preserving and protecting their interest. To conclude,

zoos

are a

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to prevent

wildlifes

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wildlife

from becoming endangered and going into extinction but if appropriate facilities are not added to make

this

animal regain a sense of safety and freedom,

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usefulness will be unproven.