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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
It is evident that technology has become a global necessity.
This
 is the reason the internet has taken over leadership from reading materials.
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 my own opinion, I totally agree with it based on several reasons described in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, the web has become a popular location to source recent and updated information at no cost compared to the reprints where it takes a lot of spending to keep up-to-date with happenings worldwide.
For example
, the media releases current news on several aspects including sports, fashion, health, politics and education to mention a few at least 4 times daily which are uploaded simultaneously on cyberspace or even most times proceed the news hour by bloggers and news correspondents which is justifiably an active channel and great comfort for curious readers.
Furthermore
, surfing has made it easier to collate several data with ease at one's convenience without travelling to and fro one's location because all the facts and figures that could be needed are already made available for consumption free of charge and as
such
, it reduces the risk of developing health issues
such
 as arthritis and back pain (slip disk).
For instance
, a research student in a tertiary institution will need to travel several miles in search of accurate and appropriate knowledge to prove his thesis and carry a large backpack to accommodate all the textbooks and journals resulting in severe health consequences. Th sum up, I strongly agree that the vast majority of folk would no longer be in need of a newspaper as they can obtain tremendous benefits from the internet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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