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You have seen an advertisement for a temporary job that involves looking after a house while the owner is travelling abroad. Write a letter to the homeowner. In your letter: – explain why you are interested in the position – describe any relevant experience you have – say when you would be available to take on this role.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the temporary house-sitting position that you recently advertised. I believe I would be a suitable candidate for
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 role, as I am responsible, trustworthy and genuinely interested in taking care of the property
while
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 its owner is away. I have previous experience looking after my own home and assisting relatives with their houses when they were travelling. I am comfortable with routine household tasks
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 as keeping the property clean and tidy, watering plants, collecting mail and ensuring that doors and windows are securely locked. I am
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 familiar with taking care of pets. if required.
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, I understand the importance of keeping a house safe and reporting any problems
immedaitely
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immediately
. I am available to take on the position from the beginning of September and can stay for the entire period of your absence. I would be happy to discuss the exact dates and responsibilities with you at your convenience. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Dhanya

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Add a little more about why this job is right for you. For example, say that you like quiet work or that you enjoy caring for homes and pets.
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Be more exact about your time. Say the date you can start, if you know it.
coherence and cohesion
Use links such as “Also” or “As well as this” to join some ideas more smoothly.
coherence and cohesion
Check small writing errors: write “If required” with a capital I, and change “immedaitely” to “immediately.”
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You answer all three parts: why you want the job, what you have done before, and when you can start.
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The letter has a polite and suitable tone from start to end.
coherence and cohesion
Your ideas are in a clear order, with one main point in each part.
coherence and cohesion
The opening and ending are polite and fit a formal letter.
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