Some people think art such as sculpture and music cannot improve quality of people’s lives so the government should not spend money on them but on health and defense. What is your opinion?

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Dear Ronny, Thank you for your email. I was glad to hear from you again. I’m sorry for not writing sooner but I’ve been snowed under with my homework.  In your
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you asked me about
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holidays. In my view, in
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the weather is quite good, sometimes it’s sunny but frequently it’s raining. As for me, my
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I’m going to travel to Europe. I’m going to meet new interesting people, taste their exquisite food and broaden my mind. By the way, I'd like to ask you about your uncle’s visit. Where is your uncle going to live? How long is your uncle coming to you?  What are you going to do with your uncle? That’s all for now. Keep in touch. With love, Alyona
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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