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Music plays a vital role in our society. How much has music influenced the way we think today? What do you think is key role of music in nowadays world?

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Over the years
music
 has played a crucial role in our world and even up until the present day
music
 is still as important.
This
 essay believes that
music
 has greatly influenced our society in various ways.
Furthermore
,
this
 essay will discuss,
firstly
, how
music
 has helped humans get through mental problems, and
secondly
, how
music
 has helped in expressing themselves in its art
instead
 of physical violence. So many
people
 have been saved by the melodies from songs, Just at the sound of them, humans light up and make everything in their world that seems gloomy bright again.
For instance
,
music
 was a
source
 of light for me when I lost my job it was the only thing that made my life, less depressing and clings on to hope for better days.
Hence
,
music
 can be a
source
 of making life better.
In addition
, a lot of violent
people
 have chosen
music
 as a
source
 to express their anger,
that is
 communicating their emotions through
music
.
For example
, America is known to have the highest amount of gang-related incidents but now that isn't the case anymore because they have been able to use
music
 to express their emotions positively without physical violence. In my opinion,
music
 as a role, is for
people
 to heal, for
people
 to communicate without violence, and it can
also
 be a way to escape from the stress of your daily life. In summary,
people
 can choose to use
music
 in whatever way or form they choose to use it for
however
, it is important that they are aware that
music
 can be a good
source
 for positive outcomes.
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