Small business should avoid recruiting young women who do not have their own family in order to avoid paying maternity leave later on. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

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Maternity

leave is becoming more of a topic of interest for workers and

businesses

. Some small-scale

companies

have a policy that only requires

women

who have their own families with

children

in order to not allocate

maternity

leave allowance. I do not agree with

this

statement because of several reasons which will be discussed in

this

essay.

Firstly

companies

have an obligation to provide at least 12 months of paid or unpaid

maternity

leave for their employees.

This

maternity

leave granted to

women

is a legally protected right and is

also

considered a human right. It's acceptable that for small

businesses

paid

maternity

leave can be challenging because they have few employees and limited resources. Small

businesses

that do not want to pay

women

for

maternity

leave and create a discriminatory recruitment process can be sentenced by the court to pay greater costs.

Furthermore

creating discrimination while recruitment process does not ethical attitude for all employers both small and big and it is against to law.

Secondly

, it is a common phenomenon during a job interview that

women

are asked whether they plan to have

children

For example

, some

businesses

hire a married woman who has no

children

and

tell

Change the verb form

tells

show examples

her not to have

children

for a long time.

Women

who are subjected to

such

treatment by managers or human resources workers are exposed to mobbing in the workplace.

This

is both an intervention in private life and a violation of the principle of equality. In conclusion, paid

maternity

leave is a legal obligation for

companies

and an attitude to the contrary can cause many constitutional and human rights violations, especially the pregnancy discrimination law. If

Companies

do not want to face greater penalties in the future and should avoid discriminatory recruitment processes.

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Small business should avoid recruiting young women who do not have their own family in order to avoid paying maternity leave later on. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

TASK 2 (Academic and General Training) You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved? Write at least 250 words.

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everthing organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Schooling is no more necessary, since more and more information are accessible on the Internet, and student can study just as well at home. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?