The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.

The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.
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The two pie charts depict the projected proportion of world productions by division in two different years (2040 and 2060).
Overall
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,service will constitute the most significant segment of predictions for global
production
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in both years
while
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agriculture is predicted to make the least part of
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production
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.There is minimal change in the projected proportion. Looking at the details, service and manufacturing sectors will make up 40% and 31% of world productions in 2040 respectively, these figures will increase to 43% and 32% in 2060.
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,It is anticipated that
energy
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the energy
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sector will account for 7% of global
production
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in the first year and
this
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then
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will decline to 5% in 2060.
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proportion of
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from materials and info-com Tech will comprise
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3% and 15% respectively in 2024, and both will increase by 1% after
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a 20year
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20year
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20-year
period.
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, predictions show that agriculture will decrease from 4% to 1% in 2060.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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