Many things that used to be done in the home by hand are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages than disadvantages?
Many house chores which in the past were done by hands are now overtaken by
machines
.This
development has its own advantages and disadvantages.In this
essay
we shall discuss some of the positives and negatives of it and a Add a comma
,essay
recommedation
shall be provided at the end.
Correct your spelling
recommendation
To begin
with,there are several disadvantages of using hands on
all household duties.Add a hyphen
hands-on
Firstly
,it is time consuming
.Add a hyphen
time-consuming
This
means that one will take alot
of Correct your spelling
a lot
time
on one chore before proceeding to the other.For example
,washing clothes by hands
will take the whole morning Fix the agreement mistake
hand
in
order to finish whereas a person using Change preposition
apply
automatic
machine will only load dirty linen into the cleaner and proceed to another work.Add an article
the automatic
an automatic
This
will not only safe
Replace the word
save
time
but also
energy
Add an article
the energy
of
the worker.Change preposition
for
Therefore
,it is much beneficial to use machines
for time consuming
duties than doing them by ourselves.
Add a hyphen
time-consuming
On the other hand
,its
is expensive to purchase and install Correct pronoun usage
it
machines
.Some machines
require technical expertise to run which will demand training before operating them otherwise
they will be ran
erroneously leading to faults and probably home accidents.For,instance,Change the verb form
be running
be run
wash
machine when connected Correct article usage
a wash
faultly
to the Correct your spelling
faulty
drainange
system can spill water on the floor making it slippery and Correct your spelling
drainage
subsequently
leading to accidents.This
can be harzardous
especially in a home where there are little children and old people who are prone to injuries.Correct your spelling
hazardous
Machines
therefore
should be handled with care and craftness
to avoid posing danger to the Correct your spelling
craftiness
crafted
crafts
houshold
.
In conclusion,household Correct your spelling
household
machines
are good and can help us save time
and energy at home but they should be well managed or used with caution especially if they are using electricity to run.It is advisable for the user to perform risk
assessment before Add an article
a risk
consindering
them for work.Correct your spelling
considering
Manufactures
should provide clear Correct your spelling
Manufacturers
guidlines
on how to safely use them to avoid damage and possible accidents.Correct your spelling
guidelines
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