Some people think that children perform better in a single-sex school compared to a mixed school. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Some people believe that
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in a single-sex school are smart than
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in a mixed school. I completely disagree with
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statement, sexes in the schools are irrelevant with their grades, their performances on their studies or exams are caused by themselves and
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in the schools.
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of all, the results of
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in the exams, mostly affected by the
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themselves, if they concentrate on topic which they are learning in the classroom and review their studies every day, it will make them have a good performance in the
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, regardless of the sexes of their friends. Another reason that has an influence on the
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in their studies is the
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.
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are the ones who teach and create the
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, if the
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cannot make the
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understand the subject matters, it will make the
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face some problems when they are having the
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.
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, when I studied math subject
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year with a teacher who cannot express her thought clearly, as result I almost failed my
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due to misunderstanding about the subject. Studying in single-sex schools, the
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will have a better performance in the exams. I strongly argue
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the two primary reasons that the
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would be doing good or not in the
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is from themselves and their
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, not their friends' gender.
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