Some people think that children perform better in a single-sex school compared to a mixed school. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people believe that
students
in a single-sex school are smart than
students
in a mixed school. I completely disagree with
this
statement, sexes in the schools are irrelevant with their grades, their performances on their studies or exams are caused by themselves and
teachers
in the schools.
First
of all, the results of
students
in the exams, mostly affected by the
students
themselves, if they concentrate on topic which they are learning in the classroom and review their studies every day, it will make them have a good performance in the
exam
, regardless of the sexes of their friends. Another reason that has an influence on the
students
in their studies is the
teachers
.
Teachers
are the ones who teach and create the
exam
, if the
teachers
cannot make the
students
understand the subject matters, it will make the
students
face some problems when they are having the
exam
.
for instance
, when I studied math subject
last
year with a teacher who cannot express her thought clearly, as result I almost failed my
exam
due to misunderstanding about the subject. Studying in single-sex schools, the
students
will have a better performance in the exams. I strongly argue
,
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the two primary reasons that the
students
would be doing good or not in the
exam
is from themselves and their
teachers
, not their friends' gender.
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