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Fast food has become more common in recent years. Some people think that it has a negative effect on lifestyles and diets. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the
fast
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fast-food
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food
 industry is developing in many countries in the world. Fast
food
 seems to have become a
favorite
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food
 of many
people
 and especially young children.
However
, many
people
 recognized that it is harmful to lifestyles and diets. In my way of thinking, I absolutely agree with
this
 opinion because its drawbacks outweigh its advantages. On the one hand, lifestyles become more and more passive in
the
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cooking. Namely, a lot of restaurants have junk
food
 ready to serve.
Therefore
,
people
 don’t have to
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going
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grocery
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groceries
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,
preparing
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prepare
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 and
cooking
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cook
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 the meals like
the
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 past.
Moreover
, they have
habits
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 to grab a snack on the go to satisfy their cravings
instead
 of home-cooked meals.
On the other hand
, fast
food
’s impacts on
healthy
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 are
the
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detrimental long term.
Firstly
, fast
food
 is less healthy than home-cooked meals. To paraphrase, pre-made
food
 is high in saturated fats and added sugars and a
low-fiber
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 diet. For
this
 reason,
this
 consumption is to blame for many diseases
such
 as heart attack, increasing blood pressure, etc.
Moreover
, due to calories and processed preservatives in fast
food
,
people
 are at risk of obesity, especially childhood obesity.
Secondly
, one thing
people
 worry about is
food
 poisoning. To paraphrase, fast
food
 chains don’t vouch for
food
 safety. So, it is easy to have a digestive disease due to
food
 additives. In conclusion, its negative effects on health are undeniable. It seems to me that
people
 should control their eating behaviour to protect their health. Fast
food
 has become more common in recent years. Some
people
 think that it has a negative effect on lifestyles and diets. Do you agree or disagree?
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