Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century, and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates.  What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

Today’s world challenges with several problems related to the global warming issue, which leads to the
rise
of
sea
levels
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becoming more serious than
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before. Some solutions will be given to
this
problem.
Sea
level
rise
is one of the most severe impacts of global warming due to melting glaciers and thermal expansion of
water
, which threats small-island nations and coastal regions. Glaciers and ice sheets have been melting for some decades, because of human activities which lead to a continuous
rise
of
water
in our blue planet.
Moreover
,
global
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warning
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  has
effected
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on amount of snow falling in
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areas which does not allow
water
change
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to their solid phase. Another driver of
sea level
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rise
is
thermal
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expansion of
water
; as the ocean warms seawater
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less dense and expands. All of
this factor
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leads to
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problems for human kinds in some islands and
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costal
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region.  Global warming,
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leads to the
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rising of
sea
levels will, not stop unless some measures
such
as consuming renewable energy as well as protecting forests reduce the amount of
carbon
dioxide and other greenhouse gases on the planet. Shifting the ways we make and use energy can be a good way to address
this
issue.
For example
, imposing
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tax on
carbon
dioxide can force factories and power stations to use solar and wind power.
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these kind
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of taxes
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people to change their cars with electric ones. Another solution
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directly
effect
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on
amount
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of greenhouse gases is maintaining forests which their trees store
carbon
dioxide through photosynthesis and store it as
carbon
in their wood.
Hence
planting more trees and stopping deforestation can have a huge impact on the problem of global warming, and its consequences. One of the most important environmental
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which is related to
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human kind
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future is global warming and its consequences
such
as rising
water
levels, which can
be address
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if drastic measures
taken
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by people on the earth.
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