Some people say that music is good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,

population

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have different views about singing playing a significant role in bringing individuals of various experience and

ages

together or not. I think

although

, it seems that musical way is considered the significant thing to get population together, it is unimportant way collecting nation together who have not same practice and

ages

. On the one hand, there is no musical language for anyone so that family of every country can listen to any

melody

, which the lyrics are not understanding for everyone. Most importantly,

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to

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the piece

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is unlimited in order that

community

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the community

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can gain some knowledge and broaden their horizons by listening to different types of country

melody

.

For example

, if a person listens to the “Mugam” that national tune kind of Azerbaijan,

this

person will be aware of the culture of Azerbaijan. Listening to

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soul is not only a good way for getting

crowd

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of different fashion but

also

ages

together.

Consequently

, listening to rock is vitally necessary for individuals and it brings folk to the same thinking whose ability and

ages

are different.

On the other hand

, other types of countries have different art and between older citizens and youngsters have huge musical differences and because of these reasons to

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to listening

listening

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the

melody

is not considered a vital role for bringing society together.

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means that

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most of the time older community have a tendency to listen to slow singing

such

as classic or retro,

nevertheless

young

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crowd are accustomed to listening to active singing like rock, jazz or rap.

For example

, if a character prefers to listen to

classic

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the classic

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melody

,

as a

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it will be difficult to get together other persons who tend to listen to rap opera. In conclusion, I believe even though

melody

plays a crucial role in the life of people to bring them to the same opinion whose art and

ages

are different, it is still substantial and undeniable by listening to music a body cannot get the same thinking.