Some people think that global environment problems shold be dralt with internationally. Others, however, believe that they have to be tackled domestically. What is your opinion?

According to

some, global environmental

problems

have to be tackled globally,

while

others believe that they should be solved domestically. In my opinion, I consider that global environmental issues should be dealt with internationally to avoid the negative influence in the future. The first reason is that global warming affects all

countries

around the world and needs a joint effort to tackle it.

In other words

, the international conference ought to implement some strict rules which can reduce the causes of global warming.

For example

, the emission of greenhouse gasses must be decreased in all

countries

.

Therefore

, there needs to

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effort from all

countries

to solve and reduce the danger of

this

problem. Another point is that tackling environmental

problems

is a financial burden many

countries

can not afford on their own. To put it simply, some special devices which are related to the environment are so complicated and they are difficult for poor

countries

to get them.

Hence

, joining many

countries

to tackle

this

problem would provide the ability from the financial side.

Finally

, air pollution and marine pollution affect more than one country at a time. To illustrate, some environmental issues influence a large area of land which includes some nations. So, these affected

countries

should join together and help each other to solve these

problems

.

To sum up

, to have an obvious positive effect on global environmental

problems

, many

countries

have to join together to tackle these

problems

.

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would be dire consequences to the Earth if governments did not solve the environmental

problems

.