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Creative artists should be given freedom to express their ideas through words, pictures, music or films. Some people nevertheless think that the government should restrict artist’ freedom of expression. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, freedom of speech has been a topic of debate in many parts of the world. While some people argue that it is necessary to give composers an incentive to show their artworks viewed as the mental motivation of human beings, I believe that the local authorities are able to put limitations on their independent expression. It is crucial to know that artists' words play an essential role in influencing the public. The authors' unlimited freedom is responsible for causing the social crisis, which is more likely to lead to a negative public response and impact government restriction.
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, when these influencers publicly advocate ethnicity, politics, and religions. By their artwork's context, which may be more capable of provoking some m
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 as violent protests or even a civil war. There is no denying that some works of art provide viewers and readers with an opportunity to access a sort of recreational activity.
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, the way of inappropriate content, other exceptions could promote both immoral thinking and impulsive b
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of those kinds of films with tomographic or violent views, which out of government's censorship, could cause some consequences of not only violent b
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 creativity in work is taken into consideration as an inspiration in modern society, total freedom could be risky for authoritative bodies if the influencer's speech has an enormous impact rather than them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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