In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Accommodation is one of the basic needs of human being around the world.

However

, the perception of possessing a house works differently in different nations.

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, some cultures encourage owning an accommodation

instead

of living in a rented house. There are some possible reasons for

this

viewpoint

although

this

could lead to several drawbacks which will be explained in my below essay.

To begin

with, owning a home is encouraged in some cultures, especially Asian culture, for a few reasons: The

first

reason is that houses and real estate are considered worthy immobile property which they could use for earning profits even after utilizing them for a long period. The

second

cause for the Asians to desire

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home is

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heritaging

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issue

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because they are born in the long_term tradition that an offspring will be inherited

properous

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prosperous

value from their parents, in which houses are considered most valuable item.

For example

, my friend told me that her mother_in_ law kept repeating that she would

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inherit

inherited

her apartment

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the son who took care of her or she would sell it if her sons abandoned her.

On the other hand

,

this

perspective may result in unexpecting disadvantages. A kid who was born with

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spoon may discourage

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effort themselves because their parents would transfer all the prosperous possession to them in any

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.

For instance

, there was a so_called Duke in Southern Vietnam in

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decade who possessed

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acres

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of field and kilograms of gold when his parents passed away,

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he

didnot

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did not

didn't

know how to develop his heritage yet using them unpurposely, he died as a homeless as a consequence.

Thus

, transferring valuable materials to the

next

generation may be disadvantageous

instead

. In conclusion, homing possession is an existent viewpoint in some nations.

Although

there are several plausible causes, people should consider

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effects of

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Nevertheless

, the most important possession a child should own is high-quality education.