Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
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For instance
, false charges were filed against the Menendez brothers, accusing them of murdering their parents to inherit their wealth. After Linking Words
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investigation, psychologists assigned to each brother ensured that both had experienced severe trauma during their childhood, leading them to believe that killing their mother and father was the only way to feel safe.
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narrow view leads to the incrimination of innocent people. Linking Words
For example
, breaking news in the US reported that a woman shot two men, lethally injuring them. Fortunately, the police found out she acted in Linking Words
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, so the charges were dropped. If not for the flexibility of the legal system, Change the spelling
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mother protecting her infant would be in jail.
In conclusion, some feel that a thorough investigation process will assist the judicial system in becoming more just, Linking Words
while
others feel that punishing each type of Linking Words
crime
with fixed terms is the correct strategy. Use synonyms
However
, I believe that allowing people to be heard and explain their actions will lead to substantial benefits.Linking Words
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task achievement
Ensure that all examples are absolutely clear to avoid any potential misinterpretation by the examiner.
coherence cohesion
Use transition words consistently throughout the essay to maintain smooth flow between ideas and paragraphs.
task achievement
The essay comprehensively addresses both sides of the argument, showing a balanced perspective.
coherence cohesion
The introduction clearly states the essay's main argument, and the conclusion effectively summarizes the points discussed.
task achievement
Main points are well-supported with relevant examples, such as the case of the Menendez brothers and the self-defense scenario.
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