'There should be no legal age for drinking.' Discuss this statement giving reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Consumption of alcohol has increased drastically around the world. Different countries have different laws on the upper

age

limit to drink.Some believe that there should be no

age

restricttion

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restriction

restrictions

.

this

essay will discuss, why anyone below the

age

of 18 should not be legally allowed to drink,as it may lead to

increase

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in the

crime

rate and adversely affect their health.

Firstly

,people as young as 18 are not mature and can easily get into the wrong company.Because of their immaturity, the chances of them

comitting

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committing

crimes and getting on the wrong side of the law.

For example

,there was a shocking case of

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assault on a young woman by a gang of men.During

investigation

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the investigation

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,it was noticed that a young juvenile boy was

the

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apply

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part of

this

assault.

Furthermore

,

this

person was drunk and not in his senses at the same

of

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crime

.A

crime

of

this

nature made the law increase the

age-limit

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age limit

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for drinking.

Secondly

,it has

proved

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that early drinking

deteoriate

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deteriorate

health in the later stages of life.According to a recent survey,liver cirrhosis and cancer is

second

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biggest cause of

deaths

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worldwide.

For instance

,one of the well-known

actress

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recently came out in the media about her

deteoriating

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deteriorating

health condition,citing the reason as regular consumption of alcohol from a very young

age

.

Hence

,keeping

age

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the age

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limit should be strictly legalised in all

the

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apply

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countries. To conclude,Drinking has become a part of the culture globally.But there should be strict laws on the

age

limit from which they can consume so as to decrease the

crime

rates of the countries as well as keep the younger generation healthy.