Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?

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little room for doubt that children spend lots of

time

in front of

computers

.

This

issue can possess two sides, the bright side and the dark side. In my opinion, overusing

computers

can contribute to some devastating physical and mental damages. So, I totally disagree with

this

issue.

Firstly

, Siblings' physical health plays a significant role in every society. They are socials' bedrock. Society would be dynamic enough, as long as, it has strong

adults

. Base on these facts, teenagers and

adults

who spend a long

time

with

computers

, might be at risk of different diseases like obesity and heart attack and trauma. When they spend

time

in their room, they are not able to find free

time

to go outdoor and do exercise.

For example

, there are a large number of

adults

who are fat because of overusing

computers

in comparison with previous generations.

Secondly

, security is an important factor in someone's life and children are no exception. It is no secret that the virtual world is full of attractive advertisements that push teenagers to do offensive attitudes,

such

as watching aggressive videos or knowing some criminals who want to push them to commit a crime. It is deeply highlighted that offspring who use the computer more are more prone to break the law.

For example

, siblings spending

time

surfing the internet, have a large potential to do fraud.

On the other hand

, using

computers

might provoke people to study new things and prompt young people to become interested in academic issues. today, the internet is accessible for everyone and base on these facts, there would be loads of opportunities to acquire new things like updated know-how.

Furthermore

, the internet and computer bring the chance to make a friend easily,

however

, nobody can be sure these kinds of friendship are suitable or not. generally , these two points would have merits for

adults

, if the operation of using a computer by children be observed by parents. In conclusion, overusing

computers

can be the main reason for many diseases and offensive behaviour. It may bridge some benefits,but, generally, it should be under the control of parents.

Thus

, I deeply disagree with

this

issue.