Your local council have asked locals some suggestions on how to keep the city safer. Write a letter to council. In the letter, you should: - explain what the council can do - what the people can do - tell how the community will benefit by keeping the city safe.

Dear Sir or Madam, According to the survey which asked for some suggestions on improving the

city

safer, I am writing

this

to give you some recommendations.

This

letter mentions

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what the council can do, what local communities can participate

, and

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what can be the advantages of having the

city

safe.

First

of all, lighting on the roads should be improved as soon as possible, and

this

is what the council can do and give

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priority. As almost all criminal records in the

city

occurred at night, particularly in the darker area near the

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Manhattan

Road.

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, the council can reduce

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rate by supporting children and teenagers

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education and places to live. Another factor

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is necessary to drive

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is drawing attention from the local people. Basically,

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people can avoid commuting alone at night.

Lastly

, by developing the

city

, the community will gain several benefits.

For instance

, they can feel more comfortable when travelling at night. Another good example is that people from

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city

may want to live here because of

safety

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city

. I look forward to seeing the improvement of the

city

safe Sincerely, Jenny Chan