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Many working people get little or no exercise during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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As modern lifestyle started to impose its routine, so people have got less active physically.
As a result
, it concluded in a variety of illnesses and health problems. To get into the
problem
, it is essential to find out the causes of why people do not get enough exercise. Following the causes, reasonable solutions will be shared.
First
 of all, most of the modern world activities are getting done by sitting.
For example
, 9-5 desk jobs, drivers and many other occupations require employees to sit whether to use a computer or to operate a vehicle.
Secondly
, at our
pastime
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 we prefer to sit, either to rest at home or chat with friends.
Lastly
, doing exercise requires a particular amount of spending which not all citizens can afford.
On the other hand
, it would be unfair to expect individuals to solve
this
problem
 completely. Here, organizations and governments should initiate supportive and motivational regulations in order to get positive feedback from their citizens. Companies may afford gym expenses which may increase employee satisfaction and loyalty as well.
Moreover
, governments should create awareness in schools and instil its importance
to
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 pupils.
Also
, park areas in the cities and some type of gym tools have to be built near the densely populated areas.
Additionally
, individuals should be in the consciousness of healthier life and they have to pursue
active
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 type of entertainment.
For instance
, while meeting friends they should tramp in parks
instead
 of sitting in cafes. After looking causes of
this
problem
, it is felt that all the responsible parts have to participate and do their best to tackle
this
problem
.
On the other hand
, no matter what the conditions are, individuals always have to take care of themselves.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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