It is often said that governments spend too much money on project to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Many countries allocate large budgets to preserving wild nature,
although
Linking Words
there are some people who disagree because if some more important issues which need to be addressed , I strongly believe that
this
Linking Words
protection is necessary and I will explain more details in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, the protection of flora and fauna by authorities is important due to the crucial role of every single part of it in the ecosystem. Without balanced and healthy living nature there will be several consequences for humankind, and to maintain a healthy ecological balance on the earth, all living creatures should be protected.
For example
Linking Words
, If a single species would become extinct, the whole food chain is disrupted and it can affect humans on the top of
this
Linking Words
chain.
On the other hand
Linking Words
,
although
Linking Words
there are several problems that need to be addressed by the administrations, protecting wild nature is necessary to solve a lot of men made problems. The major factor that can repair the human effect on the planet is
wildlife
Use synonyms
. Humankind activities have led to some phenomena
such
Linking Words
as climate change and  global warming, and the only major factor which can negate the consequences is
wildlife
Use synonyms
.
For instance
Linking Words
, the huge amount of emitted carbon dioxide never would be disappeared unless photosynthesis in the forest.
Hence
Linking Words
we have to protect
wildlife
Use synonyms
first
Linking Words
  for ourselves,
second
Linking Words
, for negating our impact on the planet. In conclusion,
although
Linking Words
there are some who believe spending a huge amount of money to protect
wildlife
Use synonyms
is unnecessary, and it is better to spend
this
Linking Words
money on other issues. Due to some important reasons, I think
this
Linking Words
protection is important and should be continued.
Submitted by cena.m.89 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • conservation efforts
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem health
  • eco-tourism
  • environmental degradation
  • interconnectivity
  • inherently linked
  • quality of human life
  • effective government spending
  • complement each other
What to do next:
Look at other essays: