It has been suggested that everyone in the world wants to own a car, a TV and a fridge. Do you think the disadvantages of such is a development outweigh its advantages?

Some people believe that technological innovations and tools,

such

as automobiles, televisions, and

refridgerators

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refrigerators

, can bring huge benefits to our lives,

therefore

everyone should own them. I personally think that they can

also

bring some side effects.

However

, the benefits far outweigh its drawbacks. There are several merits of having those technologies as they can improve our efficiency, vision, and health condition.

Vehicle

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is one of the most significant innovations to modern society

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because it can enhance one's productivity by saving his or her time

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commuting from home to office.

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, ensuring everyone

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up to work on time can help companies and stores provide products and services in a timely manner, which can boost the efficiency and economy of our society. Other than cars, news and documentaries that are informative showing on televisions can broaden our minds and perspectives, while TV series and comedies that are entertaining can kill and boredom and fatigue from our

hective

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active

hectic

lives.

Additionally

,

fridge

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is

also

an important

equipment

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that is

essential to our health as it can keep the food

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in

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fresh and prevent them from rotting. There are

also

some drawbacks if people use these tools too often.

First

of all, cars are the main factor of

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greenhouse gas. Carbon dioxide emitted while driving can

rise

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raise

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the global temperature and cause

catastropic

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catastrophic

natural disasters like floods and

turnadoes

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tornadoes

tornados

.

Secondly

, the

refridgerator

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refrigerator

can

also

adversely impact our environment. The ozone sphere of the earth can be damaged by the air generated by

fridge

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, which makes it another contributor

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global warming.

However

, the government is investing money and scientists are devoting their time

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new technologies that can alleviate these issues.

For instance

, electronic cars and eco-friendly fridges are widely used nowadays. In conclusion, technological inventions can significantly improve the quality of our daily lives and the efficiency of

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society.

However

, overusing these tools can damage our environment,

this

issue can be addressed by the government and scientists though.