The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People

with knowledge of fine arts are very rare to find. There are many beliefs that

art

is

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easy form and can be

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by all. Whereas some believe

people

with artistic skills have

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. In my opinion, those who polish and work towards building their expertise can be

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truly

recognised as having an

art

. Many argue that painting, poetry, music can be made by each and all. I completely extend support to

this

.

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, without learning a form of

art

, it is nearly impossible to do exceptionally well unless the person is blessed with

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ability

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, there are certain musicians or film actors who

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coincidentally

coincidently

started working in

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the

their

field and eventually learnt during their progress.

Thus

, they started low but with extra efforts they became a home name in their business. In contradiction to

this

, despite utmost willingness and zest to learn a form of

art

,

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a lot

of

people

could not perform well.

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is often widely due to

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of special

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of the sector. There is a saying, artists are god gifted. Thereby, some even with tremendous efforts do not succeed in the

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genre

genres

.

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they lack confidence and at the same time; music, sports, poetry, painting, are not given as

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as other education in the school. In my view,

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is one of the drawbacks which leads to lack of

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these areas as a main career and is mostly looked upon merely as a leisure activity. In conclusion,

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would like to share my opinion that with general education, if

art

is given equal importance the sector can grow. I am

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that it can be learned by all with

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proper guidance and training which may or may not be totally dependent on special

ability

.