International travel is becoming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to move and more tourist. Do the advantages of increased tourists outweigh disadvantages?

International trips are becoming cheaper and counties open their doors for more and more

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boom has more benefits than many disadvantages. There are many advantages,

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,

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can lead to these consequences,

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as land clearing, but there are

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disadvantages in

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and they play

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role

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for

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instance,

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is increased costs,

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risk and disruption of socio-economic and

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conditions and recourses. In my

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the most important advantage

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boom

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led to the emergence of millions of new jobs and an increase

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prosperity in

countries

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around the world.

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has a large and important impact on the

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economy

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because

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component of the country significantly increased.

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money received from

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can invest in the development of the

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infrastructure and in other

industry

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Also

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it expands the contributions to the

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payment balance develops the spheres of

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economy in the economic sphere.

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tourism

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helps to employ many people because the

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industry has a very branched network.

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industry,

labor

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is mainly not mechanized, which follows to attract

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resources and guide them to the maintenance of

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. These

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factors are almost the main component of the economic prosperity of

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there are disadvantages of

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, disruption of culture and recourses. It can be caused by vandalism, littering and illegal export of

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heritage and due to

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, the economic and social factors of the country are deteriorating. Destruction of cultural conditions associated with vandalism. Some

tourist

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spoil monuments, litter in nature, namely in the oceans, rivers and maybe on the mountains, which

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harms nature. In conclusion,

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a negative component is present in

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for the

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but

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it is not very significant that advantages of the

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because a large number of

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helps the development and prosperity of the economy in the

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and

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it helps to increase workplace for people.