Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Other however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are debatable views about whether it is better to have standard punishments for each type of

crime

or to consider more about other factors or circumstances before

commiting

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committing

crime

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. In my opinion, both have numerous advantages and drawbacks,

however

, I strongly believe that judgment after considerations about reasons behind

this

is a wiser choice and I will support my view elaborately in

this

essay. On one hand, there is a group of individuals who support the idea of imposing fixed retributions because of various reasons.

First

of all, one of the most

substaintial

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substantial

benefits of fixed punishments is

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save

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a lot of time for the trial.

In other words

, standardized laws make court

proceeding

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faster and more efficient since the judges do not have to waste time considering

further

factors.

Moreover

, these type of

ragulations

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regulations

regulation

is the possible way to save money not only for the government but

also

for the victim’s families. Since offenders will be released after receiving retributions, the government can save money for other expenditures of the country and the victim’s family use less of their budgets to hire lawyers or for transportation.

However

, these rules

sometimes

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too primitive to be applied in

this

modern world nowadays.

For instance

, many people who kill someone because of self-defence do not deserve to be

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classified

into the same category as other killers.

On the other hand

, it is believed that every

crime

should be considered

eleborately

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elaborately

before making

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because of its positive impacts.

To begin

, flexible

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are thought to be more equal, compassionate and humane. The judge has to weigh in the gravity of the

crime

such

as motivation, plan,… of the criminals to come up with suitable punishment which

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the fair trial for

paticular

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particular

circumstance.

Additionally

, there are more and more crimes

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without any intence or criminals were forced to do it to protect themselves are their families,

hence

, it is necessary to judge crimes differently

instead

of applying the same punishment.

Nevertheless

,

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this kind

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of laws can easily prone to bribery and corruption since rich offenders can hire good lawyers, can pay the judges or investigators for

shorter

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a shorter

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period

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of jail or lighter retributions. In conclusion, there are

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different arguments about which punishments are better to be applied

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because

both have positive and negative influences. In my point of view, I still firmly agree that

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system must consider and follow the different

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procedures

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for each case before giving punishment.